I'm so glad that part worked! Honestly, those were the parts of the fic that I was most concerned about coming across well. :D
Heeheehee! The Stanton kisses were some of the most fun to write. I feel like Stanton is perfectly comfortable kissing everyone and everything and Franklin and Bash are just like, "Sure! New experiences!" Meanwhile, Damien is trying to be used to this, but there comes a line (ex: Peter) and then he just...short-circuits. Miserable!Damien is just the best.
Hee! I thought of you when I was writing that scene. Because, of course, everyone loves Hanna and Hanna's comfortable with herself, so why the conflict? And Peter's like, "Uh, CONFLICT! CON-FLICT!"
Thank you for your comment! Your words always make me smile! :D
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Date: 2012-01-13 10:23 pm (UTC)Heeheehee! The Stanton kisses were some of the most fun to write. I feel like Stanton is perfectly comfortable kissing everyone and everything and Franklin and Bash are just like, "Sure! New experiences!" Meanwhile, Damien is trying to be used to this, but there comes a line (ex: Peter) and then he just...short-circuits. Miserable!Damien is just the best.
Hee! I thought of you when I was writing that scene. Because, of course, everyone loves Hanna and Hanna's comfortable with herself, so why the conflict? And Peter's like, "Uh, CONFLICT! CON-FLICT!"
Thank you for your comment! Your words always make me smile! :D