Oh wow, I bow down to your superior kissy-ness (shut up, that's totally a word!) I thought I got a lot of kissing in one of my fills, but you absolutley take the prize!
There is so much to love in this fic, but I particularly enjoyed both Peter and Jared's kisses with Damien, the kiss between Hanna and Carmen (and I knew I wasn't the only person to think that that was a good idea!) and the obvious but oh-so-needed kiss between Peter and Jared.
I particularly enjoyed the way that a lot of the kisses were viewed through the reactions of the onlookers because it was lot more amusing that way. And also, your section headings, as ever, are just awesome! I'm so glad you just went with all the kissing and thank you for filling my prompt so brilliantly!
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There is so much to love in this fic, but I particularly enjoyed both Peter and Jared's kisses with Damien, the kiss between Hanna and Carmen (and I knew I wasn't the only person to think that that was a good idea!) and the obvious but oh-so-needed kiss between Peter and Jared.
I particularly enjoyed the way that a lot of the kisses were viewed through the reactions of the onlookers because it was lot more amusing that way. And also, your section headings, as ever, are just awesome! I'm so glad you just went with all the kissing and thank you for filling my prompt so brilliantly!